Wednesday, 22 February 2017

Feedback on Second Edit


To get some feedback on my music video so far i got the class to watch it through. The questions that i asked where:

1. Are there too many lip-syncing scenes?

2. Does the typography work well?

This was the feedback i got:

"You should use kinetic typography to make the text more significant and interesting instead of it being static."

"The lip-syncing is okay but you could benefit from removing one or two of the scenes so that it's not too repetitive."

"One of the lip-syncing scenes was out of sync."

"You could try putting the words in different colours and make it move on the screen."


The feedback that i got confirmed what i thought i could improve about my video, so i'm going to make these changes for my next edit as they clearly stand out to an audience as well as myself. I'm going to use After Effects to make the typography move in some way so that it fits in with the moving images. I'm also going to refine my edit so that no scenes are out of sync for my final version.

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