Feedback on Third Edit & Print Products

Feedback on Third Edit

This was the feedback I got on the third edit of my music video.

Does the jittery text effect work well?

I think it works well, it helps to break up the visuals.

I think it works really well with the mood and the style of the video. It also stops the footage from seeming repetitive by breaking it up.

It works well but you could maybe try and make each word come up in time with it being sung in the song.

It works well and breaks up the visuals. It’s different and I really like it.

Yeah I like it.

Yeah, I liked it and thought that it worked well with the theme and the style of music.

I chose to ask this question as it was a new effect that I had added into the video that I was unsure of. From the response I think that it works well to add more movement to the text and break up the visuals which was my aim with the effect. One comment suggested that I make each word come up individually but I'm going to choose not to do this as I've already used that technique in another part of the video and I don't want it to be too repetitive.

Do you think there is a link between all three products?

I think the link between the digipak and advert is really good and the link to the video is strong too.

The link between the digipak and the advert is very strong. The music video has more bright colours in it so the link between the video and the print products is a bit weak in that sense, however it’s strong enough to know they link because of the colour blue.

All three link together well, especially with the font and layout of the “Halsey Colors/Badlands” thing. You could change the colour of the “Halsey Colors” thing at the beginning of the video to pink to match the digipak and poster. (it might be pink already I can’t tell).

They all link really well especially the colours in all three products.

The digipak and advert look very similar with the posturize effect but they both look good and professional. It might be worth using a slightly different image on one of them, with the same colours and effects, just so they’re not identical.

Yeah, I think that they link really well especially with the recurring colours throughout and the style of the video and the print products. I also really like the fact that you've used the same colours, style and image on both of the print products.

I wanted to ask this question because I think it's important that there is a correlation between all my media products. One of the comments said that the title at the beginning of my music video should match that of the print products which was something I was considering before and will now do to create a stronger link and more recognisable logo. From the feedback I am sure that there is a link between all the products through colour, text and effects. Someone mentioned that there should be more colour on the print products, however I have not yet added one of the images to the design which will make up for the lack of colour.

Do you think there’s enough information on the advert?

You could have information about a hit single that’s featured on the album or a quote from a critique reviewing it highly.

The amount of information on it at the moment is great, but I think including a good review from a well-known music critique would be a good idea and make it a stronger product. Also maybe information about songs included on the album would be good too.

I think there’s enough information because the layout works really well and you don’t want to make it too crowded.

Yes, the layout works really well as you don’t want to over crowd it.

I think the simplistic design works well.

Yeah, I like the fact that it is quite minimal in its use of text but still manages to get across all the information you need and looks very stylish.

I was also worried about the fact that my album advert is quite simplistic and minimal however from the feedback I think that it works well with the design and gets enough information across to the audience. I have considered adding information about a single or a review but don't think it's completely necessary and would only ruin the composition.